hi i would just like to corect the mistakes
Dear Dad
I keep asking my self 'where are you'
Your place is really empty and I miss you a lot
im sure you remember that garden
which I indeed loved to visit alot
I still remember
when you used to ask me to race
We used to hug and whisper to each other
I keep remembering those honest words. Dad
where are you
Now as I became a young teenager
you are not around
and left me here alone
Now I keep asking my self
who is going to take your place
My heart is now empty
and got tired of waiting for you
I really love you so much
and I will not ever for get you
anyway it was a great poem and i really enjoyed it
Oo( Dear Dad ) oO
رد : Oo( Dear Dad ) oO
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